Friday, August 24, 2007

have a sweet shabbat..

uniquely familiar at each holy encounter
you parade in
escorted by sanctified procession

sweeping us in
crowning the mundane with harmony, peace, beauty

inching out
leaving behind void
and an aftertaste of heaven

12 Comments:

At Friday, August 24, 2007 9:43:00 AM, Blogger David_on_the_Lake said...

what a sweet and aweesome poem...

Poet..where have you been hiding?

I love that feeling..that u captured soo perfectly..

 
At Friday, August 24, 2007 5:53:00 PM, Blogger The Dreamer said...

beautiful

 
At Saturday, August 25, 2007 5:36:00 AM, Blogger ~ Sarah ~ said...

what dreamer said :)

 
At Sunday, August 26, 2007 5:18:00 AM, Blogger jewmaican20 said...

And what an aftertaste that is!
Thanks, m00k.
Have a great week....

 
At Tuesday, August 28, 2007 1:47:00 AM, Anonymous Rivki said...

Groin is a simple amoeba with human renown.
I bleed to seek ineffably a showdown
tragic like hunger with something to borrow
from present pain kudos kinder tommorow.

 
At Wednesday, August 29, 2007 11:21:00 AM, Blogger Scraps said...

I love your descriptions! Your poem *is* Shabbos, you don't even need to say it. :)

I hope your Shabbos was as beautiful as you described!

 
At Sunday, September 02, 2007 1:25:00 PM, Blogger nuch a chosid said...

Beautiful ;-)

 
At Sunday, September 02, 2007 10:12:00 PM, Anonymous Rain duck said...

Such a shabbos imbued poem!
I've heard Rav Eliyashiv liked it so much he couldn't resist printing it out on shabbos - the good thing is, it made him reconsider converting to Islam.

 
At Tuesday, September 04, 2007 12:45:00 PM, Blogger yingerman said...

So sad,
I read it 3 days after Shabbos, and truly missed Shabbos.

On the up side, only 3 days to Shabbos...

 
At Tuesday, September 18, 2007 2:29:00 AM, Blogger Lady-Light said...

Definitely "mayane olam habah" poetry. Btw - what does "oolala" next to various blogs (including mine)mean?

 
At Friday, September 21, 2007 4:56:00 PM, Blogger Sara with NO H said...

a gmar chasima tova shanas geula vyeshua v'hisromos keren yisroel. a git yom tov easy fast poil ois alwes git

 
At Sunday, July 19, 2009 6:02:00 AM, Blogger Ben said...

Great poem! You write with great feeling. Hope your shabbos was as beautiful as you described. This is Benjamin from
Israeli Uncensored News

 

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