have a sweet shabbat..
uniquely familiar at each holy encounteryou parade in
escorted by sanctified procession
sweeping us in
crowning the mundane with harmony, peace, beauty
inching out
leaving behind void
and an aftertaste of heaven
posted by anonym00kie @ 7:25 AM
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12 Comments:
what a sweet and aweesome poem...
Poet..where have you been hiding?
I love that feeling..that u captured soo perfectly..
beautiful
what dreamer said :)
And what an aftertaste that is!
Thanks, m00k.
Have a great week....
Groin is a simple amoeba with human renown.
I bleed to seek ineffably a showdown
tragic like hunger with something to borrow
from present pain kudos kinder tommorow.
I love your descriptions! Your poem *is* Shabbos, you don't even need to say it. :)
I hope your Shabbos was as beautiful as you described!
Beautiful ;-)
Such a shabbos imbued poem!
I've heard Rav Eliyashiv liked it so much he couldn't resist printing it out on shabbos - the good thing is, it made him reconsider converting to Islam.
So sad,
I read it 3 days after Shabbos, and truly missed Shabbos.
On the up side, only 3 days to Shabbos...
Definitely "mayane olam habah" poetry. Btw - what does "oolala" next to various blogs (including mine)mean?
a gmar chasima tova shanas geula vyeshua v'hisromos keren yisroel. a git yom tov easy fast poil ois alwes git
Great poem! You write with great feeling. Hope your shabbos was as beautiful as you described. This is Benjamin from
Israeli Uncensored News
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